Date: 12/28/2011 11:02 PM Title: If I Had You
Yo. Dude. I didn't notice any crappy grammar at all. Like, seriously? Great job! You even nailed the dialogue, which most of us English speakers can't do anyway.
If there was only one thing, it's that you said "they felt wrong for the little guy" when it should be "they felt bad for the little guy". But, like, seriously? Pretty much flawless.
And btw, the content was AMAZING! LIKE, SERIOUSLY, TOO CUTE FOR WORDS! I love the Warblers and it was awesome to have them all over this. SO CUTE!
Heeey! Well, I've written in my native language before and I just noticed my way of doing it in English is more similar to the one we use here in writinig :x
Yep, that is a mistake. I'm correcting it immediately XD
Thaaank you, I mean, you're so sweet and all and thank you! :D
Date: 12/22/2011 04:35 PM Title: If I Had You
I agree! I would never have known you weren't native English if you hadn't said! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Thank you! :') I'm planning on writing more, I hope I won't disappoint anyone^^
Date: 12/18/2011 04:00 PM Title: If I Had You
the warblers = cupid's little helpers :) LOVE IT!
this was fine in terms of the english (i'm a native speaker). i don't remember seeing any serious grammar violations. if you want to write fics in english, i say, go for it!
Yes, they are! They are all hardcore Klainers and they don't even deny the fact! :D
Then I'm relieved, I was really worried that I made some fatal mistakes in it, but thank God I could avoid them :'D I'm really enthusiastic about writing in English, so I will surely write more! ^^
Thank you for your kind words! :)))