this made me cry. not kidding. the part when kur talks to his mom, the tears pooled in my eyes. but they fell when blaine talked to her and made his promise to her. that really got to me. this was so wonderfully emotional. i noticed a few typos–most of them consisting of hitting the letter next to the one that you meant. for example: cisit instead of visit. food instead of good. lard instead of large (rectangular stone). "free hand on the heart of him mother's stone." him should be his. these are just minor issues. the one thing i noticed, that briefly confused me, was an incorrect word. you wrote, "Kurt could feel Blaine staring at him, still waiting for Kurt to tell him his plans. Blaine looked hesitantly into Blaine's big honey brown eyes and finally spoke. " i think you meant to say "KURT looked hesitantly into blaine's big honey brown eyes and he finally spoke." once i realized that the wrong name was used, it made more sense. so, that's all the constructive suggestions that i have. hope they help.

Haha I'm still laughing at the part about Blaine's eyes, but I fixed it and the other things you mentioned. Thanks so much for telling me! I really should get into a habit of proof reading these things. :) I'm glad you liked it and thanks again for commenting :D

This was cute. Made me a little teary.